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In May of 2012 I was in the mood for flash fiction - super short stories. I had read a lot of flash fiction pieces, and was trying my hand at both writing it and getting it published. Here's a story I initially wrote for our writing group's Round 32, and which I submitted to an online site for publishing consideration. It got rejected because it was a smidge too long. Oh well, I still think it is a great story! 113 Secondsby Rusty Keele "This is where it all happens," said Mr. Harvey as he held the door. Three men entered the heavily secured room. Huge, black monitors and rows of computers lined the walls. "This is Ray, our technical analyst who monitors the Time Drive." Ray shook their hands and cast a nervous glance at Roland, his supervisor who had entered with them. "Don't worry Ray, these fine gentlemen are just here to make sure everything is hunky-dory. Isn't that right?" The two agents glanced at each other without saying anything. Mr. Harvey continued, "Go ahead, show them…

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