comments to others #365

there are many instances of sentences written to specific people – love you all – that are also just thinking out loud, so this here below is one of those I want to keep to remind myself to take such advice sometimes…. [the context was a long overdue comment on some work sent by a colleague. Finally getting some time to respond, I wrote]: ______________________ Dear A As promised – well overdue – I returned to this. I find a pdf harder to comment on – cannot add track changes etc but, a few comments I dunno how useful… The opening image always matters, so erm, what is this – ‘rings an obscure bell to our otherwise modernised world’ – while a bell is a dated metaphor in our digital world perhaps, is there one more in keeping with the theme of ecology or folklore that would serve the same intent (perhaps bell would be good if about churches, or about alarm bells and the workday) but can you think of one that announced the concern you mean but is aligned more with folklore or…