Your shit is unreadable 22 ▲ unstory 60 days ago · Life · hide · 2 comments I can open a feed aggregator, click 20 random links, and close them one by one without reading a whole title. My brain does a fast check on the shape and style, filters it out, and trashes it. Everything is sterile. Zero pulse, no risk. Nice grammar, nice syntax, dead words. It's polished sludge copied from the same content mills, where every bit of emotion is sanded down by some checklist and fear of getting canceled. Everyone plays it safe, writing like they are sitting in a corporate lobby cafe. No position, no stance, just a "topic." And the fucking length. Why does one short thought need six paragraphs of metaphors, fake warmth, and 10 angles of neutrality? Hook, problem, solution, three subheadings, and a conclusion that repeats everything three times. The same rhythm from start to finish. Competent-looking filler that completely buries whatever tiny idea was actually there. It's summer. It's hot, like it has been for thousands of years. Thanks for the 1,000-word coverage and… Log in to reply on the Fediverse. Comments will appear here. Gordon @snowgoon@mastodon.social 60 days ago [-] the flip side is everything you write feels deliberately provocative, a cry for attention and clicks. Find some balance. peasant @peasant@gaygeek.social 58 days ago [-] Ironic that I clicked on 20 different links on Bubbles and your blog post was one of them. Quite hypocritical when this post has the same rhythm and usage of metaphors that the author complains about, which include the short punchy sentence structure that you commonly see from people who write on X or LinkedIn.
