4 hours ago · Writing · 0 comments

8:00PM In my last post, I had to stop 50% in bec I honestly had to grieve a character that another character also grieved. I’m now 80% in, and it has become even more interesting with some character development of Takeru. Did feel that some parts could’ve been tighter, but wondering where this is all leading. I just need to take another break to breathe. I think it’s wonderful when a book does that to you, though. 11:15PM Welp, I finally finished the book. It was exhilarating. Though I feel like there was a long denouement at the end that kind of broke the pacing. But everything before that…wow. I admit I wept, because given who I am and what happens in the story, I would. A little bit sad to learn that M.L. Wang is no longer writing anything in the Theonite universe, but I respect her reasons.

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